[Edu] Making Games

[Kate Jones]

Hi, Bill and Carol,

Here are the typos I found:

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Page 1, under "Title":
adopted - adapted

Page 1, under "Objective" and under "Materials":
retile - reptile

Page 4, last line under "Action Cards":
with less than five players. - with fewer than five players.

Page 8, in check list:
GREENSNSAKE - GREENSNAKE

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Other recommendations:

Page 3 - Instead of Interjections, use Prepositions or Conjunctions.

Page 1, "Creation Directions":  When organizing the cards: include one each
of every possible combination.

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Best wishes on this fine project. Sorting, organizing, taxonomizing,
grouping, differentiating, integrating...these are some of the most
important functions of the human mind and are the basis of mathematics and
the scientific method for understanding the world. Congratulations to you
all for making these skills accessible to students in such an enjoyable way.

-- Kate Jones




-----Original Message-----
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[mailto:edu-bounces at lists.looneylabs.com] On Behalf Of William M. Reed
Sent: Saturday, August 12, 2006 9:32 PM
To: Looney Labs Education Discussion List
Subject: Re: [Edu] Making Games

Typos?  Crap.  I swear I checked that darn thing over and over.  But, you're
right.  i found two more.  How many did you find and where were they?
>:-(

Bill
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On Aug 12, 2006, at 5:43 PM, Carol Townsend wrote:


	Bill - this is REALLY well done!  Can we put it up on the Looney
Labs website?  If so, I'd suggest also running in thru a quick spell check
before we do - I noticed a just a couple of typos that needed cleaning up,
and I want to present the best view of you to the world! 
	
	I'm not sure when I can get it put up (most of our geeks are at Gen
Con right now), but here's where a link to it would go:
http://www.looneylabs.com/OurGames/EducationalIdeas/index.html 
	
	this is so cool!
	Carol
	
	
	On 8/12/06, William M. Reed <wreed at cdeducation.org> wrote: 

		In order to clearly explain my directions for converting
Aquarius into an educational categorizing/sorting game, I needed several
illustrations.  I put the whole thing into a .pdf document and posted it to
my website, which you can peruse at: 

		 www.wmreedfamily.net